6 things i have learned

while line editing i’ll tell you in person w/ ruth curry:

  1. don’t say ‘things’
  2. do not say ‘things’
  3. don’t say ‘things’!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  4. don’t say ‘thing’
  5. don’t say ‘thing’ when you can say something else
  6. don’t say ‘things’ when you can be precise

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